我的作品

                                    
                                   月夜有感
                          
                        我随明月上西楼，独爱凭栏望九州。
                        坎坷岁年随鹤去，情思不宁驻心头。
                                      

                                   忆江南
                              年华少，
                              逐梦问晴空。
                              惊梦醒寻寻觅觅，
                              湿寒衣月泪朦胧。
                              未悔受剑锋。
                                
                                 亿江南
                              风声冷,
                              寂寞夜阑珊。
                              残月寒光湿树影，
                              两三星火画渔船。
                              无语听鸣蝉。
                                
                                 一叶落
                              一叶悲，
                              秋风碎，
                              梦中柳影恍如醉。
                              
                              画楼月影寒，
                              多少离人泪。
                              离人泪，
                              泪滴心头碎。  
                   大家比D意见拉，本来捂止禁少价，但前排部机大修，结果.......
                   觉得捂好就一定要出声啊，有批评先有进步。