2021届高考英语基础写作范文

广东英语基础写作范文选登

  * 基础写作经典背诵范文(第1-2篇)

1. 基础写作(调查“谁是你的偶像”)     
【写作内容】  上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生
中进行了一次调查(survey)。 以下是调查数据：
偶 像( idol )   女  生  男  生
伟    人    18 %         18 %
父    母    25 %         11 %
影视明星        50 %   14 %
体育明星         6 %         48 %
（没有偶像）         1 %          9 %
根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：
1．调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象； 
2．男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；
3．“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异；
4．男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；
5．你的偶像及理由。
【写作要求】 
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
one possible version：
last week, we did a survey among 2,600 students on “who is your idol”.   the survey shows that half of the girls choose film and tv stars as idols, while 48% of the boys prefer sports stars.   as the data shows, “parents” rank the second for the girls, but the forth for the boys. however, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls.  as for me, thomas edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.
2. 基础写作(介绍奥运中的射击项目)
[写作内容]  你很荣幸地成为XX北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运
比赛项目的英语介绍。请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：
背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。
1896：第一次成为奥运项目
1904：中断
1928：中断
1932：重回奥运会
1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛
现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有17项。
[写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容
[评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
【基础写作范文1选登】
    shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. the sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and the 1928 games. the sport returned to the olympics in 1932. women were first allowed to compete in the olympics in shooting in 1968. the sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 olympic games to 17 today.
   【基础写作范文2选登】
it was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. shooting became an olympic event officially in 1896. yet, twice in history (1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the olympics. it returned to the games in 1932, and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968. the sport has been growing steadily from 1896’s three events to today’s seventeen.
【基础写作范文3赏析】 shooting was originally a tool of people’s survival, which developed into a sports event at the end of nineteenth century (定语从句).  in 1896, it became one of the olympic events for the first time(简单句).  in 1904 and 1928 olympics, it was stopped, after which it returned in 1932(定语从句).  it was in 1968 that women were allowed to join in the shooting competition for the first time (强调句) .  from then on, the event is developing steadily and smoothly with the shooting competition number increasing from 3 in 1896 olympics to17 by now(简单句中使用“with+复合宾语结构”作为状语).
【专家点评】   这篇基础写作的内容看上去很多,要在规定的句数内完整地描述射击这项体育运动的发展过程, 如果全部使用简单句, 就无法在规定的句数内完成整体的写作。但考生经过对全部内容的合理安排, 使用简单句、并列句和复合句,就可在规定的句数内把这篇文章出色完成。这样在各个句子之间, 合理地使用了连词,保证了句与句之间的紧密衔接, 使得这篇基础写作显得非常的紧凑与简洁。
基础写作就是考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力, 具体地讲检测考生提取信息、分析信息、构筑信息、处理信息和表达信息的能力。这篇基础写作主要考查了考生构筑信息和表达信息的能力，因为在写作内容中已经把全部信息按照条目列举出来了。范文的作者恰到好处地把全部信息按照时间分割成：最初——进入奥运——进入奥运后的发展——现状，四个阶段，然后按照这条时间线索进行信息的构筑和行文。
** 3.基础写作经典背诵范文(第3-4篇)
 成语故事基础写作(1) —画蛇添足
请用英语解释一下“画蛇添足”这个成语故事。古时几个人分一壶酒。他们都想独自喝完那壶酒，所以就定了一个规矩：每人在地上画一条蛇，谁画得最快，这壶酒就归谁。有一个人很快就把蛇画好了。他正打算喝这壶酒时，看见别人都还在忙着画，就决定给蛇再画上几只脚。结果，他的蛇脚还没加完，另一个人已经把蛇画好了。那人一下把酒壶夺了过去，说：“有谁见过长脚的蛇？”。这个故事告诉我们这样的道理：做得过分和做得不够都是不对的.
[写作内容]
  1）请按内容要求写这个成语故事，要写标题。
  2）这个成语故事必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。
[写作要求]  只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
[评分标准]  句子结构准确，信息内容完整和连贯。
 drawing a snake and adding feet to it
long long ago, several people had a jar of wine among them and all of them wanted to drink it by himself. so they set a rule that every one would draw a snake on the ground and the man who finished first would have the wine. one man finished his snake very soon and he was about to drink the wine when he saw the others were still busy drawing, so he decided to draw the feet to the snake. however, before he could finish the feet, another man finished and grabbed the jar from him, saying, "who has ever seen a snake with feet?” the story of "drawing a snake and adding feet to it.” tells us going too far is as bad as not going far enough.
成语故事基础写作 (2) —刻舟求剑
   请用英语解释一下“刻舟求剑”这个成语故事。故事大意为：楚国有个人坐船渡江时，他不小心把自己的一把宝剑掉落江中。他马上掏出一把小刀，在宝剑落水的船舷上刻上一个记号。船靠岸后，那个楚人立即从船上刻记号的地方跳下水去捞取掉落的宝剑。他怎么找得到宝剑呢？船又继续行驶，而宝剑却不会再移动。像他这样去找剑，真是太愚蠢可笑了。
[写作内容]
1）请按内容要求写这个成语故事，要写标题。
2）这个成语故事必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。
[写作要求]  只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
[评分标准]  句子结构准确，信息内容完整和连贯。
making his mark
a man from the state of chu was taking a boat across a river when he dropped his sword into the water carelessly. immediately he made a mark on the side of the boat where the sword dropped, hoping to find it later. when the boat stopped moving, he went into the water to search for his sword at the place where he had marked the boat. as we know, the boat had moved but the sword had not. isn’t this a very foolish way to look for a sword?
4. 基础写作（“我与奥运”活动）
假如你在春节期间到北京大学参加了一个为期十天的冬令营活动。以下是你参加本次活动期间所写的部分日记摘要。
 
[写作内容]
     你拟向某英文杂志“我与奥运”栏目投稿，请根据日记内容写一篇短文
介绍本次活动的内容及你的感受。你的稿件需包括以下五方面的内容：
    1.本次活动的概况（名称、时间、地点）；
    2.介绍校内活动的内容；
    3.介绍校外活动的内容；
    4.概述你对本次活动的总体感受；
    5.你对本次活动的建议并阐述原因。
[写作要求]
    1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
    2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
    句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
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during the spring festival, i attended a ten-day winter camp in beijing university. we took part in many different activities, including a lecture on olympic games history and an english language course. we also visited a new sports stadium; which is ten times bigger than our school! although the lecture was a little boring, most of the activities were very interesting and useful and i had a fabulous time. i think the programme would be even better if there are more outdoor activities because they help to broaden our horizons.
* 基础写作经典背诵范文(第5-6篇)
5. 基础写作 (一场精彩篮球比赛)
【写作内容】  假如你是篮球迷，昨晚你在家观看了一场n b a休斯顿火箭队(the houston rockets team)与洛杉矶湖人队(the los angeles lakers team)的精彩篮球比赛 ，请你根据以下内容要点写一篇日记。
1．观看比赛的时间、地点及球队；
2．姚明来自中国上海，很高，是n b a顶级运动员；
3. 他以精湛的球技闻名于世，却不忘他的祖国和老师；
4. 姚明是你最喜欢的运动明星，是你心目中的英雄。
【写作要求】1．必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容；2．日记的开头已为你写好。
【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
sunday, fine
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one possible version:
sunday, fine
last night i watched an exciting basketball match at home – the huston rockets team vs the los angeles lakers team. as we all know, yao ming comes from shanghai, china, who is serving in the houston rockets team and is also a super athlete in nba now. he is famous all over the world not only for his amazing height, but also for his perfect skills in basketball. in spite of this, he has never forgotten his country and his teachers in china. yao ming is my favorite sports star and the hero in my heart.
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yao ming—my favorite sports star 姚明-我喜欢的明星
i am a basketball fan. my favorite sports star is yao ming. as we all know, yao is a super star in nba now. he is famous in america not only for his amazing height, but also for his perfect skills in basketball and in communications. although he is very popular throughout the world, he has never forgot his country and his teachers in china. he＇s the hero in my heart.
6. 基础写作（介绍XX年北京奥运会主体育场 —“鸟巢”）
[写作内容]
请根据以下的情景说明和写作要求，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
假如你是一名导游，请你根据所给的提示，向来北京观光的外国游客介绍XX年北京奥运会主体育场 —“鸟巢”。
场馆名称 国家体育场（鸟巢）
建设地点  奥林匹克公园
建筑面积  258，000m²; 长330m；宽220m；高69.2m
座 席 数 91，000
赛时功能 奥运会开幕式和闭幕式；田径、足球
赛后功能  体育比赛和文化、娱乐活动中心
开工时间  XX年12月24日
完工时间  XX年底
评   价  中国十大新建筑奇迹之一
[写作要求]  1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
[评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
• 参考词汇：开幕式和闭幕式    opening and closing ceremonies
娱乐活动  entertainment平方米  square metres
• ladies and gentlemen,
welcome to beijing! i’d like to introduce you to the beijing national stadium, also known as bird’s nest.
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       that’s all! thank you!
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one possible version
ladies and gentlemen,
welcome to beijing! i’d like to introduce you to the beijing national stadium, also known as bird’s nest. the stadium which is 330 metres long, 220 metres wide, and 69.2 metres tall is located in beijing olympic park, covering 258,000 square metres. the splendid opening and closing ceremonies are to take place in bird’s nest, where the main track and field events as well as football matches during the games will be held.
after the games, bird’s nest will be used as the center of sports games, culture and entertainment events. it began to be built on december 24th, XX, and was completed at the end of XX. people all sing high praise for “the bird’s nest”, considering it as one of the ten new construction wonders in china.
     that’s all! thank you!
** 基础写作经典背诵范文(第7-8篇)
7. 基础写作（XX年北京奥运会火炬）
［写作内容］奥运火炬已经正式推出了，根据下列信息，介绍以下奥运火炬。

样式 整个火炬像一个中国传统卷轴，意在表明中国通过奥运会传播中国文明。因为纸是中国的四大发明之一，经由古丝绸之路将文明传到了世界各地。
颜色 北京奥运会火炬由银红两色组成，体现了中国传统与现代元素。
图案 火炬表面布满了据说能够带来祝福与和谐的“祥云”。
性能 能够抗低压，低温，狂风暴雨。
参考词汇：卷轴 paper scroll     祥云 lucky clouds  元素 element
[写作要求]
1. 标题：the sacred torch for the XX beijing olympic games
2. 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容；
3. 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。
[评分标准]  句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
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the sacred torch for the XX beijing olympic games
    to spread the chinese culture and civilization, the torch for the XX beijing olympic games was designed to resemble an ancient paper scroll. as one of the four great inventions of china, paper has spread civilization to the whole world through the ancient silk road. and the whole torch is colored red and silver, embodying (showing) both traditional and modern chinese elements. more distinctively, the lucky clouds that are said to bring blessings and harmony are covering the surface of the torch. not only beautiful, the torch is so well-designed that it can withstand low pressure, low temperature and strong winds as well as heavy rain.
8. 基础写作（介绍游泳运动员罗雪娟）
［写作内容］   请用英语为上海出版的《学生英文报》写一段人物介绍，
介绍游泳运动员罗雪娟。内容要点如下：
1）罗雪娟（luo xuejuan）：昵称：罗罗；女，23岁，浙江人；
2）从小接受游泳训练，XX年，崭露头角；
3）取得成绩：XX年在巴塞罗那（barcelona）世界锦杯赛中获得三枚金牌；
XX年雅典奥运会打破世界纪录，夺得100米蛙泳（breaststroke）冠军。
4）其他情况：由于身体原因，现宣布退役，将到北京大学读书。
[写作要求]
1）短文必须使用5个句子介绍包括以上要点的全部内容，可以适当增减
细节，使内容连贯；
2）介绍须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成英语。
【评分标准】   
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
============================================================one possible version：
born in zhejiang province, luo xuejuan, nicknamed luoluo, is a 23–year–old chinese female olympic swimming champion.  she went in for swimming at an early age and with her great efforts, she began to show her great talent in XX.  three years later, she drew the world’s attention by getting three gold medals in barcelona world championships.  at the XX athens olympics, she broke the world record and got the women’s 100-meter breaststroke champion.  due to health problems, luo xuejuan has announced retirement and she will study at beijing university.
 * 基础写作经典背诵范文(第9-10篇)
9. 基础写作（张华的一个梦）
【写作内容】   
请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
张华昨晚做了一个梦，梦见自己为北京奥运会做一名志愿者。他充当来自世界各地的运动员及官员的向导兼服务员，给他们指路，为他们递送毛巾（towel）、笔、纸等日常用品，必要时还帮助运动员搬行李；张华同来自世界各国的外国朋友亲切交谈。在交谈中, 张华让外国朋友更多地了解北京和中国。外国朋友感谢他，并且称赞张华的英语说得很好。尽管志愿者工作辛苦，但张华认为很有意义。
【写作要求】  
1.  短文的标题为：张华的一个梦； 
2.  短文必须使用5个句子介绍包括以上要点的全部内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯。
【评分标准】   句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version：
one dream of zhang hua’s
last night, zhang hua had / dreamed a sweet / wonderful dream, in which he volunteered to serve for the XX beijing olympics / olympic games.  as a volunteer, he not only acted as a guide for the officials and athletes from all over the world, showing them the way to their destinations, but also was an attendant, delivering daily supplies, such as towels, pens paper and so on, to the officials and athletes.  when necessary, he helped the athletes to carry luggage.  in addition, because he tried / did his best to help the foreign friends from different countries know more about beijing and china, they thanked zhang hua very much and thought (that) zhang hua’s english was very good  / zhang hua could speak english very well  / zhang hua was good at english.
although the volunteering work was simple and tiring, zhang hua thought it was very meaningful and he was quite satisfied with what he had done.
10. 基础写作（迎奥运长跑）
［写作内容］
假设你校将举行为期一个月的“迎奥运长跑(running for the olympics)”
活动，你作为通讯员将为学校英语通讯写一篇稿件，内容包括：
     活动目的：提高学生体质，迎接北京奥运；
活动时间：1 2月1日至 1 2月3 1日； 
     活动内容:：1 2月1日开幕式，全校学生将进行环校跑 (已举行) ；
活动要求：同学们每天跑步，男生跑2公里，女生跑1.5公里；每班的学生总距离要达到XX公里以上，相当于从广州到北京的距离。
    【写作要求】
    1．必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容；
    2．写作中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
    【评分标准】   
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
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one possible version:
now, a programme called  “running for the olympics”, is going on in our school, lasting from december l to december 31.  the programme is to improve the students' health, and welcome the coming beijing olympic games.  the opening ceremony was held on december 1, when all the students ran together around the school.  during the one-month programme, the students are encouraged to go running everyday, boys for 2 kilometers while girls for l.5 kilometers.  the organizers wish that by the end of the programme, the total running distance of all the students in each class will reach XX kilometers, equal to the distance from guangzhou to beijing.

 ** 基础写作经典背诵范文(第11-12篇)
11. 基础写作（北京奥运会的口号）
［写作内容］假如你是李华，请根据以下内容，给你的外国朋友julia写一封信
介绍北京奥运会的口号的内涵与特点。XX年北京奥运会的口号（slogan）是
“同一个世界，同一个梦想（one world one dream）,”其内涵和特点如下：
内涵 1、体现了奥林匹克的精髓---团结、友谊、进步、和谐、参与和梦想；
2、反映了北京奥运会的三大理念---绿色奥运、科技奥运、人文奥运；
3、突出“全人类同属于一个世界，全人类共同追求美好梦想”的主题。
特点 1、两个“one”优美排比（in parallel），“world”和“dream”前后呼应；
2、＂同一个世界，同一个梦想＂中的中文口号用“同一”来表达；
3、文简意深，既是中国的，也是世界的；既易记上口，又便于传播。
［写作要求］    1. 信的开头和结尾已给出；
2. 只能使用５个句子表达全部的内容。
［评分标准］   句子结构准确性，信息内容完整性，篇章结构连贯。
dear julia:
now i would like to tell you something about the slogan of the beijing olympic games.
…
that’s all. thank you.
                                                   yours truly,
                                                    li hua
one possible version:
dear julia:
now i would like to tell you something about the slogan of the beijing olympic games.
the slogan of the beijing olympic games, “one world one dream”, fully reflects the essence of the olympics — unity, friendship, progress, harmony, participation and dream. on the other hand, it also reflects the three concepts of the beijing olympic games — green olympics, high-tech olympics and culture-enriched olympics. “one world one dream” is simple in expressions, but profound in meaning; it is of china, and also of the world. the two “one ”s are perfectly used in parallel, and the words “world” and “dream” form a good match, so the slogan is easy to remember, read and spread. it is the word “tongyi” in chinese which means “the same” that is used for the english word “one”, on the whole, which highlights the theme of “the whole mankind lives in the same world and seeks for the same dream and ideal.”
that’s all. thank you.                              yours truly,
                                                    li hua
12. 基础写作（应聘北京奥运志愿者）
［写作内容］
   假设你是新华中学的学生李华，某英文报招聘兼职北京奥运志愿者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信，内容包括：
1. 表示感兴趣；
2. 说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历；
3. 希望得到回复
［写作要求］   
1. 信的开头和结尾已给出；
2. 只能使用５个句子表达全部的内容。
［评分标准］句子结构准确性，信息内容完整性，篇章结构连贯。
dear sir or madam，
i'm a student from xinhua middle school. i'm glad to learn that you want a few olympic games volunteers, which i'm quite interested in．  
…
i'm looking forward to your reply.
 
yours faithfully,
                                                       li hua
one possible version:
dear sir or madam，
i'm a student from xinhua middle school. i'm glad to learn that you want a few olympic games volunteers, which i'm quite interested in．  
i think i’m fit for the job because as a student, i’ve read a lot and have much knowledge in many fields.  i’m fond of english and do well in both speaking and writing.  besides, i’m easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others. above all, i once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station.  so i’m sure i can do the job well if i get the position.
 i'm looking forward to your reply.
yours faithfully,
                                                       li hua
* 基础写作经典背诵范文(第13-14篇)
13. 基础写作（中国的基本情况）
假如你叫李华,你的美国朋友daniel想在XX年随同父母来中国观看奥运会，他对中国很感兴趣,想及早了解中国的基本情况。请你根据提示给他写一篇英语作文。
[写作内容]

国名 中华人民
共和国 
地理位置  亚洲东部,
面临太平洋 
 面积 九百六十万
平方公里

人口 
  13亿 
民 族 
   56  
气候 
   冬冷夏热

国情   1. 有勤劳勇敢的人民,拥有50XX年的文明；
  2. 首都北京将在XX年8月8日举办第29届奥运会。
[写作要求]
   1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
   2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]  句子结构准确, 信息内容完整, 篇章结构连贯
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one possible version:
the people’s republic of china lies in the east of asia, facing the pacific ocean, and covers a total area of 9600000 square kilometers and five of the world’s 24 times areas. china belongs to continental climate, that is, cold in winter and hot in summer depending on different areas.
china has 56 nationalities with the largest population of 1.3 billion in the world. we are a hard-working and brave people with a civilization of 5000 years. so we hope china will successfully host the 29th olympic games on october 8th, XX, in the capital of beijing, china.
14. 基础写作（购买一本英语书面表达的书）
【写作内容】  假如你是李华，刚进入高三学习，需要购买一本英语书面表达
的书，请根据下列提示，写信给你在外文书店工作的朋友 jack，请他帮你挑选。

书的内容要求 1．含写作技巧；如文章结构，过渡词使用；
2．有多种写作题材及其范文；
3．最好有近三年高考的书面表达题。
其他 1．最新版本，供今年高考备考使用；
2．如果可以，就把书邮寄到学校。
【写作要求】
1．必须使用5 个句子组成连贯的短文介绍全部所给内容。
2．参考词汇：过渡词 transitional words; 版本 edition
注：信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
dear jack,
i’m in senior grade 3 now, and i’m writing to you to ask for a favour.
      ……
thank you very much, my dear friend. i wish i hadn’t put you to so much trouble.
yours,
li hua
  【评分标准】   句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
one possible version：
dear jack,
i’m in senior grade 3 now, and i’m writing to you to ask for a favour. could you please help me to find a book on how to improve my english writing skills, such as how to organize an article and how to use the transitional words? hopefully, this book will cover a wide range of topics, each with some proper examples. it would be better if it includes the topics and possible versions of the college entrance examination for the past three years. of course, it should be of the latest edition for the coming college entrance examination. if possible, please post it to my school.
thank you very much, my dear friend. i wish i hadn’t put you to so much trouble.
yours,
li hua
** 基础写作经典背诵范文(第15-16篇)
15. 基础写作（一封关于洗衣机的投诉信）
【写作内容】
请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
三个月前你从商店买了一台洗衣机。机器出现了毛病：开不动，有噪音。请就以上情况给商店写一封投诉信，请他们派员来修理，并告知他们你本周每天上午都在家等候。
【写作要求】 
1、标题：a letter of complaint；
2、必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容,将5个句子组织成连贯的短文；
3、开头和结尾已为你写好。
a letter of complaint
dear sir,
…
                                                    yours,
                                                    li ming
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
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 one possible version：

a letter of complaint
dear sir,
three months ago, i bought a new washing machine from your shop.  now i am sorry to tell you that something has gone wrong with it .  there is some noise coming out and now it doesn't work.  would you be so kind as to send an engineer to look at it?  if you come before the end of the week,  i will be at home in the morning until one p.m. all the week.
                                                    yours,
                                                    li ming
16. 基础写作（品牌mp3出故障）
【写作内容】   
假设你是李华，你新买的某外国品牌mp3出了故障，现你写信到其公司
反映问题。
1． 购买日期：上个月；
2． 故障：一周前屏幕坏了，看不见显示内容；
3． 已跟当地销售商家投诉，但其不能解决；
4． 要求：更换一台新的，如不行则要求退货、拿回货款。
【写作要求】   
1．必须使用5个规范的英语句子表达全部的内容。
2．将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。
3．开头和结尾已为你写好（不算入要求的5句话里）。
dear sir or madam,
thanks for your attention. i’m writing to complain about your product.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    i am looking forward to your early reply.
                                                         li hua
【评分标准】   句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
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one possible version：
dear sir or madam,
thanks for your attention. i’m here writing to complain about your product.
last month, i bought an mp3 made by your company, which brought me enjoyment for some time. but last week, something went wrong with the screen and i can’t see anything on it. i have talked about this with the shop which sold me this mp3, but they/it couldn’t do anything about it. having no choice, i turn to you for help. i hope you can get me a new one or return my money to me.
i’m looking forward to your early reply.
                                                     li hua
 * 基础写作经典背诵范文(第17-18篇)
17. 基础写作 (介绍你英语写作的方法和心得)
[写作内容] 你的英语老师要求你在班上用英文向同学们介绍你英语写作的
方法和心得。请根据下表提供的中文提纲，选择相关的信息写一篇发言稿。
学习方法         学习效果
背诵范文 运用英语思维，进行模仿性写作
多阅读英文文章 吸取语言材料
多听英文广播 提高听力水平
学习语法 正确表达
多写日记 在做中学
多练习口语 提高口头技能
参考他人的习作 取长补短
[写作要求]     1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 开头与结尾已经给出。
[评分标准]    句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
ladies and gentlemen,
now i would like to tell you how i learn english writing.
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that’s all. thank you.
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ladies and gentlemen,
now i would like to tell you how i learn english writing.
firstly, i often recite good / beautiful english articles, which helps me think in english when i imitate english writing. secondly, i also read english articles widely so that i can take in as many language materials as possible. thirdly, in order to express myself correctly / make myself understood, i think that they are important to for us learn about some grammar, listen to the radio and practice speaking english a lot. fourthly, i keep a diary every day so that i can learn by writing. besides / in addition, i often refer to others’ articles to know what i need and what i can learn from others. that’s all. thank you.
18. 基础写作（对英语的认知情况 / 英语的重要性）
【写作内容】 某英语报社最近征文,想了解中学生对英语语言的认知情况。请根据
 下面所提供的信息,向报社写一篇浅显易懂的英语短文，说明英语的重要性。
1. 在中国各地，英语为一门必修科目，人人都应该努力学好；
2. 英语在世界上被广泛使用，是世界上最广泛的语言,大多数商业信件都是用英语写的；
3. 通过英语，我们可以向世界介绍我们的国家，也可以使我们更好地学习外国的先进
科学和技术；
4. 学好英语能使我们更好地为祖国服务，为人民服务；
5. 要努力学习英语,学习英语也是一件有趣的事情。
【写作要求】 1,只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version: now more and more people come to realize english is very important and english is a required subject for the students in middle schools all over our country so that whether you like it or not, you should work hard at it to learn it well. first, english, which is widely used all over the world, is often used as one of the working languages at international meetings and in most international business letters. second, if we learn english well, we can not only introduce our motherland to the world but also learn a lot of advanced modern science and technology from developed countries to better serve our motherland and the people .besides, the more english you know, the more information you will get. gradually, you’ll find learning english is also great fun and learning english well can make our life more colorful and more meaning.
the way to keep healthy保持健康的方法
it’s important for us to be healthy all our life.  we can’t study or work well without healthy body.
    there’re many ways to keep healthy. first of all, we should keep taking exercises every day. we can walk to school instead of taking a bus. after school, we can spend an hour playing ball games.  if we live in a high-rise,  we can walk upstairs or downstairs. second, we should have a balanced diet. finally, we must remember: "early to bed, early to rise is the way to keep healthy, wealthy and wise."
** 基础写作经典背诵范文(第19-20篇)
19. 基础写作（学生征寻住宿家庭）

【写作内容】 假如你叫李华,是广州市某中学学生。最近你校在为一批来自英国的学生征寻住宿家庭,你同意申请。请根据下表提供的信息用英语给校长写一封信,说明你申请的理由。
 申请理由
住房条件 宽敞、整洁,环境优美;
语言优势 擅长英语,父母是英语教授,不会有交流困难;
接待经验 上个月刚刚接待过两名美国学生;
参观游览 父亲可驾车陪同参观附近的名胜;
其他优势 母亲做的饭菜,外国学生喜欢吃.
【写作要求】1. 开头和结尾已为你写好
2. 必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容
3. 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文
dear sir,
 i’m writing to request a valuable chance to                              
…
i would greatly appreciate it if i could have the chance to make friends with them.  looking forward to your reply.
yours,
li hua
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
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one possible version：
dear sir,
i’m writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the british students. we have a large and clean house, which lies in a beautiful area of the city. i'm good at english and my parents are both professors of english, so i'm sure we won't have any difficulty in communicating with english speakers. my father is an excellent driver and we will be very glad to show foreign students around some nearby places of interest in our own car. last month we received two american students, who enjoyed delicious chinese food my mother cooked i would greatly appreciate it if i could have the chance to make friends with them.
looking forward to your reply.
 yours,
li hua
20. 基础写作（某学校食堂服务调查）
【写作内容】   
请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
下面是对某学校食堂服务调查情况：
1、学校食堂的优点：食堂干净；饭菜可口；服务态度好。
2、学校食堂的不足之处：价格偏高；种类偏少；等候时间较长。
3、建议：尽快解决问题。      
假设你是李华，请就本校食堂服务(canteen service)的状况给校长写一封信，反映以上问题。
【写作要求】  
         1、必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容;
         2、将5个句子组织成连贯的短文;
         3、信的开头和结尾已给出,不包括在5个句子内。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
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one possible version:
dear mr. principal,
     i’m a senior student of our school. i’d like to say something about the canteen service in our school.
     in general, we are satisfied with the clean and tidy dinning hall, it’s delicious food and the good service. however, what is not to our satisfaction is that the price of the meal is a little too high and that we can only have a limited variety of dishes to choose from. in addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. you could understand how precious time it is to us students. therefore, may i suggest that the problem be solved as soon as possible so that we can all enjoy our meals at school?
     thanks for your consideration.
                                                      sincerely yours,
                                                       li hua
 * 基础写作经典背诵范文(第21-22篇)
21. 基础写作（地理学家徐霞客）
【写作内容】   
  请根据以下提示，写一篇介绍我国明代著名地理学家徐霞客的文章。
1.  出生年代：1587
2.  著 作：徐霞客游记
3.  事 迹：徐霞客一生周游考察了十六个省，足迹几乎遍及全国。为了进行真实细致的考察，他很少乘车坐船，而对边远的山区、人迹稀疏、稀少的森林进行考察，发现了许多奇山秀景。
4.  评 价：对我国地理学发展做出了重大的贡献。
【写作要求】  
1,只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】     句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
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one possible version:
xu  xia-ke
xu xia-ke, a famous geographer in ming dynasty, was born in 1587. in order to complete his great work travels of xu xia-ke, during his life time, xu xia-ke had traveled and studied the geographical conditions of 16 provinces, having left his foot prints almost all over the land of china. in order to make a close and realistic study of the geographical conditions, he seldom traveled by wagon or boat, but almost did all the traveling on foot. by visiting some remote mountains and little-traveled forests, he had discovered wonderful mountains and attractive spots. he is considered to have made a great contribution to the development of chinese geography.  
 
22. 基础写作（凯悦酒店）
【写作内容】
请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
凯悦酒店：建于XX年11月25日，一家具有国际水平的四星级酒店;
占地面积：2800平方米；
建筑面积：10000平方米；
投资总额：9000万人民币；
位置与交通：坐落于秀丽的珠江河畔；步行仅5分钟可到达地铁站;
客房情况： 200间客房，明亮舒适；大小会议室共有8间；
餐饮方面：中华餐厅能同时容纳400多人用餐，中西美食应有尽有。
  （ 凯悦酒店：kaiyue hotel   投资： invest ）

【写作要求】
1. 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容;
2. 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文，使用必要的连接词。
【评分标准】   句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version：
kaiyue hotel, a 4-star international hotel, is located on the beautiful bank of the pearl river. the transportation is so convenient that it only takes you about 5 minutes’ walk to the metro station.
    invested with up to 90 million rmb, the hotel covers an area of 2800 square metres and has the building area of 10000 square metres. besides, it possesses 200 various kinds of bright and comfortable guest rooms. as for food, the chinese restaurant, holding at the same time over 400 people, serves all kinds of foods of chinese and western styles.
** 基础写作经典背诵范文(第23-24篇)
23. 基础写作 (清明节 --- tomb sweeping day)
[写作内容]
abby是美籍华人，最近常听到同学们提起清明节（tomb sweeping day）, 她对此非常感兴趣。作为她的朋友，请你以清明节为题，向abby介绍一些清明节的活动，内容包括：
1、时间：通常是每年的4月4 ~ 6号；
2、清明节是我国传统节日，也是人们拜祭（扫墓）时；
3、按照旧的习俗，人们要携带酒、食品、纸钱、花等物品到墓地。对墓地进行简单清理之后，人们将食物供祭在亲人墓前，再将香和纸钱焚化，然后叩头行礼祭拜；
4、这是我们悼念先人，缅怀他们丰功伟绩的日子。
参考词汇： 墓cemetery   香incense
[写作要求]    
1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
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one possible version:
    tomb sweeping day usually falls on april 4~6 every year.  it’s one of the chinese traditional festivals, in which people offer sacrifices to their ancestors. according to the chinese customs, people will bring along some food, wine, paper money, and some flowers to the cemetery of their ancestors.  after slightly sweeping the tombs, people offer food, then burn the incense and paper money, and bow before the memorial tablet.  it’s in this special day that people mourn over their ancestors and remember their great contribution to the development of our society.
24. 基础写作 (中国的舞狮)
[写作内容]
“盛世中国迎奥运，独特民俗飨宾朋”。XX是中国的奥运年，无数外国友人将来中国旅游观光，请你用英语写一篇文章介绍中国的舞狮，内容包括：      
1．舞狮是中国传统的民间艺术，每逢佳节或庆典，都以舞狮庆祝；
2．起源于三国时期，至今已有一千多年的历史；
3．一般由两人表演，一人舞狮头，另一人舞狮身和狮尾；
4．表演者在锣鼓音乐下，装扮成狮子的样子，表演狮子的各种动作；
5．舞狮随着华人移居海外而闻名世界，尤其在东南亚盛行。   
参考词汇：舞狮lion dance   
鼓drum    
锣gong
[写作要求]    
1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]   
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
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one possible version:
lion dance is a traditional chinese folk art, which is performed to celebrate festivals or ceremonies.  dating back to the three kingdoms, it has a history of over 1,000 years.  there are usually two performers who play the lion, one of whom handle the lion’s head, and the other plays the body and the tail.  the performers dress up as lions and imitate all kinds of movements of lions to the music played by drums and gongs.  lion dance is popular all over the world as chinese migrate abroad, especially in southeast asia.
* 基础写作经典背诵范文(第25-26篇)
25. 基础写作（中国的语言、文化和风俗） 
【写作内容】  加拿大中学生john在互联网上登出启事(notice)想结识一位中国网友,以便学习和了解中国的语言、文化和风俗。假设你是张华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：
你是怎样得知john的愿望；你愿意成为她的网友；你打算如何帮助她学习中文；你愿意向她介绍中国的一些风俗习惯；你盼望她把她的qq号码告诉你并且尽早互相成为好友。
【写作要求】
1. 电子邮件必须包括以上五个方面的内容，按照发邮件的格式书写，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯，将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。
2. 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内容。
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
　4. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出；
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
dear john,
…
                                                      yours,
                                                      zhang hua
one possible version：
dear john,
     i read a notice on the internet yesterday that you wanted to look for a chinese friend on the internet to help you learn the chinese language, cultures and customs. i’m very glad to be / become your friends on the internet but i don’t know whether you would like to accept me. if i’m able to become your friend on the internet, i’ll try my best to help you with chinese in my spare time. i’ll introduce some cultures and customs of china to you step by step. i expect that you’ll tell me your qq number and make good friends soon.
                      yours,
                                                         zhang hua
26. 基础写作(中国气候及农业)     
【写作内容】
请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述所给的全部信息内容。
中国面积达9,600,000平方公里，气候因地而异。根据下列信息写一篇关于中国气候及农业的短文。词汇：潮湿：humid
地区 冬季 夏季 农作物
南方 凉爽；湿润 炎热；潮湿 适宜种植水稻
北方 寒冷；干燥 炎热；多雨 主要种植小麦
西部 终年干旱少雨 不利于耕作；但部分地区盛产各种水果
东部 常年雨量充沛 庄稼生长良好
【写作要求】 
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
============================================================one possible version：
china covers an area of (as big / much / large as) 9,600,000 square kilometres, so the climate is different from place / area to place / area. it is good / suitable for growing rice in the south as it is cool and wet in winter, hot and humid in summer. in the north, wheat is mainly grown in this area because it is cold and dry in winter, hot and rainy in summer. the western part of china, dry with little rain all the year round, is not good / suitable for growing crops, but in some places varieties of fruit are grown / produced. and the eastern part enjoys plenty of rain most of the year, so crops grow very well there.
** 基础写作经典背诵范文(第27-28篇)
27. 基础写作（简介广东）  
【写作内容】  请根据以下的情景说明写一篇短文，必须使用5个规范的
英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容，短文内容要准确、连贯、完整。
假如你是一名导游, 你将带领一个外国旅游团游览广东省。
地理: 广东位于中国大陆最南部,南临南海,海岸线总长3368公里,岛屿众多。
历史: 广东历史悠久, 简称粤。.
特点: 1.  素有水果王国之称,香蕉、甘蔗、荔枝、菠萝为其四大名果;
2.  是华南工业发达之省, 水陆交通便利,海运发达;
3.  经济特区有深圳、珠海、汕头等;
4.  有“食在广东”的美称。.
注：1、短文的开头和结尾已写好，不计入句子数。
2、参考词汇：海岸线coastline； 甘蔗sugar cane；荔枝lychee；
菠萝pineapple；经济特区special economic zones。
[写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容
[评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
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one possible version：
ladies and gentlemen,
    welcome to guangdong province. i’m wang qian. and i’m more than glad to be your guide. guangdong province, also called yue for short, has a long history and is known for the saying, “don’t hesitate to have meals here.” located by the south sea in the southeast part of mainland china, it has quite a few islands off its coastline which has a total length of 3,368 kilometres. known as a fruit king, guangdong province is famous for its high-quality bananas, sugar cane, lychees and pineapples. it is also one of the most developed industrial provinces in south china, with convenient transportation both on land and water. it has several special economic zones such as shenzhen, zhuhai , shantou and so on.
    finally, i sincerely hope every one of you will enjoy yourself here.
28. 基础写作(家乡的情况)     
【写作内容】  请根据下面表格的提示，使用英语介绍你的家乡的情况。
人口 约20万
面积 约360平方公里
地理情况 坐落在大山的脚下，面临一条大河。新建有许多工厂，商店，医院
教育情况 有10所学校，每个儿童都可以上学
生活状况 丰富多彩，人们工作之余可以逛商店，看电影，跳舞，参加体育活动等。
【写作要求】 
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
one possible version：
my hometown is at the foot of a mountain, in front of which lies a big river. it has a population of 200,000 and an area of 360 square kilometers. many factories, shops and hospitals have been built. there are 10 schools in our hometown, where every child can study. people can go shopping, see a film, go dancing and play sports after work, living a colorful and happy life.
===================================================my dream place 我梦想的地方
      the winter vacation passed quickly. in those days, i have done some things. playing, doing homework and so on. sometimes i helped my mother doing some housework. she thanked to me. though, i was proud of myself. i also went over my english learning. i think i have known more than before. in the new term, i will study hard.
* 基础写作经典背诵范文(第29-30篇)
29. 基础写作(电影观众少，电视观众多)     
【写作内容】 
  请根据以下的情景说明，使用五个规范的英文句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
近几年， 电影观众越来越少，而电视观众越来越多。 其原因：
1. 电视频道多；   2. 电影质量差；   3. 电影票价越来越高。
【写作要求】 
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
one possible version：
in recent years, the number of film-goers has declined while the number of tv-watchers has increased. one of the reasons is that people have so many channels to choose that they would rather spend a relaxing evening at home watching tv than go to the cinema. another reason is that there are few really good films which are worth seeing. besides, the price of the film ticket is much higher than before. finally films give way to tv.
***================================================================***
请根据以下写作内容及要求的资料，使用5个规范句子描述全部所给信息内容。
1. 标题：a talk about american film
2. 用5个句子介绍全部所给内容。
3. 句子组织成连贯的短文。
（1） 讲座目的：使学生对美国电影及文化（culture）有所了解。
（2） 讲座内容：简要介绍美国电影（制片）业的历史。
（3） 讲座时间：周五上午10：00－11：30，共1小时30分钟。
                 a talk about american film
here is a piece of good news for you.  we shall have a talk about american film between ten o’clock and eleven thirty this friday morning. purpose of it is to help our students learn something about american film and culture.  we shall introduce to you the history of american industry of films. you are welcome to attend the talk on time.
30. 基础写作(上课时间是否上厕所)     
【写作内容】
 请根据以下情景说明,使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
 湖北省最近规定，允许中小学学生上课时间上厕所。对此,同学们有不同的看法。
赞 同 反 对
课间忘记，上课后要去属正常； 不妥，影响课堂秩序；
如果不让去，上课也不安心； 影响本人学习；
不让去会影响健康。 应该培养习惯，学会控制自己。
个人认为： 低年级可允许， 但高年级不应鼓励。
[写作要求]
1. 短文必须包括以上表格中的全部内容,可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯；
2. 使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容其中至少3个句子必须为复合句。
参考词汇: 课间休息：break time    集中（注意力）：concentrate
题目:  is it ok to permit students to go to the toilet during class ?
                                                                              
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
one possible version：
is it ok to permit students to go to the toilet during class?
we had a discussion whether it is ok to permit students to go to the toilet during class according to a recent decision of hubei province that students of junior and middle schools may go to the toilet during class.
some of my classmates think it a good decision since some of the children would forget to go to the toilet during the break and they need to go there later. if they can’t, they wouldn’t concentrate in class and what’s worse, it will also affect their health.
others disagree, saying that it will be harder for teachers to keep order in class and the study will be interrupted, and what’s more, children should form a good habit and learn to control themselves.
in my opinion, younger students may be permitted to do so but older ones should not be encouraged, since they have a 10 minutes’ break every 45 minutes.
** 基础写作经典背诵范文(第31-32篇)
31. 基础写作(高考英语听力测试的讨论)     
【写作内容】
你校学生进行了一场有关高考英语听力测试的讨论。
讨论的主题是：高考英语测试听力部分该不该取消？你的观点是：应该取消。
请根据下列提示写出你的观点。词数60字左右。

取消
高考
听力
测试 1． 缺乏听说英语的环境；
2． 考试中各地收听效果不一，缺少公平性；
3． 英语教师及语音设备城乡差异过大；
4． 今后并非人人都要与外国人进行口头交流。

【写作要求】  1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
one possible version：
in my opinion, /i think listening test should be canceled / cancelled /called off.  firstly, we seldom have the chance to talk in english, especially / esp. with foreigners.  secondly, not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future.  moreover /furthermore /besides /also /in addition /what’s more, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked up effectively.  and for certain reasons, there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between the countryside and the city.
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what can we write in a diary?日记记啥
every time i write a diary, i don't know what to write.  to me, every day is the same.  i just do the routine study.  get up early in the morning, eat my breakfast, go to school, go home after class, eat my dinner, and go to sleep after i finish my homework.  then the next day i will do the same.  but now i learn to look at things from another angle. i start to observe what happens around me every day; even it is a little incident.  when i help a little girl cross the street, or i see something interesting, i will keep it in mind and write it down.  if i use my eyes and head more, i will know what to write in a diary.
32. 基础写作（我们的生活变化）
  【写作内容】
请按照下面6幅图片的提示和所给的主题句，使用5个规范的英语句子，写一篇题为“changes in our life” 的英语短文。
 
【写作要求】
1. 标题：changes in our life
2. 短文必须使用5个句子介绍包括以上六幅图片的全部内容，其中三个句子
必须为复合句,可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯；
3. 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。
============================================================one possible version：
changes in our life
over the past twenty years or so，great changes have taken place in the life of my family.  my parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home.  and once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information，but now we watch the news and other programs on tv. especially, when they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room which was crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment．  in short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.
33. 基础写作(英语晚会)
假设你叫李平，你所在学校的英语俱乐部将举行一个英语晚会。你准备邀请你的外国
朋友john与你一起参加。
[写作内容]  请根据以下海报的内容，给john写一封邀请信，信的开头和结尾已给出。
[写作要求]  只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 
[评分标准]  句子结构准确，信息内容完整、连贯
dear john,
 how is everything?  i'm writing to let you know about an english evening and invite you to join us.
 …
i'm looking forward to your reply.
                                                        cheers,                li ping
第一节  基础写作
dear john,
     how is everything? i’m writing to let you know about an english evening and invite you to join us. the english evening will start at 7:30 p.m. on april 15th and will be held in the english club. we have quite a few activities planned such as chatting with each other in english and watching some performances by students from different classes. what is more, we are encouraging participants to exchange small gifts with each other and make friends as well. we will be providing some fruit and drinks for the evening, but we suggest you bring some food with you if you like. i believe everyone will have a wonderful time at the english evening.
    i’m looking forward to your reply.
                                                             cheers,       
li ping
34. 基础写作（高中英语新教材的看法）   
最近，你作为研究性学习课题组的成员就高中英语新教材的看法在同学中间开展了一次调查，调查的结果如下：
 
[写作内容]   请根据以上调查结果，写一份简单的调查报告。报告的开头已给出。
[写作要求]   只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
[评分标准]   句子结构准确，信息内容完整、连贯。
    i recently surveyed my classmates about their views on the new english textbook．…
one possible version：  
 i recently surveyed my classmates about their views on the new english textbook．according to the survey, 80% of the students were quite satisfied with it, while 15％disliked it and 5％had no opinion. students who liked it said the pictures with the texts were very attractive, which greatly aroused their interests in learning．moreover, the book was very interesting, covering many hot topics and providing lots of cultural knowledge of the world．however, students who disliked it complained there were too many new words and difficult sentences，making the texts difficult to understand．in conclusion, the new english textbook has helped most students improve their english enormously．
35. 基础写作(中学生社会实践调查“井冈之旅”)     
【写作内容】 21st century 英文报开展内容为“中学生社会实践调查”的征文活动。假设你参加了你校组织的中学生社会实践活动，请你根据以下信息，以“井冈之旅”（a tour to the jinggang mountain）为题，叙述其活动情况。
 
时 间：5月1 ―5日              交通工具：火车
活动内容：1、参观“希望小学”，了解学习情况；  2、与村民同吃住，了解生活状况；
          3、参加田间劳动，体验农民生活。
感 受：1、农民的生活条件改善了；2、因为政府免学费，众多好心人资助，没有失学学生。
[写作要求]  只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。  生词：学费：tuition fees
a tour to the jinggang mountain
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【写作要求】 1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
a tour to the jinggang mountain
on may 1st, i participated in a five-day tour organized by our school to the jinggang mountain by train. after we got there, first we visited the hope primary school, where we got to know the conditions of students’ study in the less developed areas. soon, we were arranged to live in the houses of local villagers to see what their real life is. there we were able to have meals with them and work in the field to experience the farmer’s life. during the visit, we were excited to find that farmers are living a better life and no children drop out of school because the government pays for their tuition fees and many warm-hearted persons unselfishly sponsor them.
◄◄◄基础写作评分参考标准►►►
一、评分原则1、本题按语言、内容、连贯三个项目给分。2、评分时，首先根据文章句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性, 初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。4、评分时，应注意信息内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点：1．活动时间、交通工具和组织者；  2．参观希望小学，了解学习情况；
3．与村民同吃住，了解生活状况；4．参加田间劳动，体验农民生活；5．感受变化及原因。
三、说明：1、内容要点可用不同方式表达。2、对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
3、强调句子使用的数目，不强调字数。
36. 基础写作(中西方传统的建筑物风格)     
【写作内容】
请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
 [情景说明]　
你刚到欧洲参加夏令营回来，现在请你向同学们简单介绍中西方传统的建筑物
风格，内容如下：

中　国 欧　洲
木质结构，如寺庙、宫殿、大房子等。 石头结构。如城堡、教堂等。
非常漂亮。 随处可见，欧洲的一道风景。
容易被火烧掉、被虫咬和酷热的天气毁掉。
许多历史遗迹就这样被毁的。现在许多都是重修，甚至多次重修。 许多历史遗迹依然如故。

[写作要求]
　　1. 标题：buildings in china and europe。
　　2. 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容。
　　3. 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
one possible version：
buildings in china and europe
    different culture has different buildings. chinese buildings especially temples, palaces and big buildings are built up of wood. beautiful as they are, they are easily burned down, and destroyed by insects and hot climate, and many of the historical buildings have been rebuilt more than once.
    in europe many castles and churches were built up with stones as materials and it is now a common sight there. many historical buildings are the same as it used to be.
37. 基础写作(简介家乡)     
【写作内容】  假设你即将去国外参加一个英语冬令营，你要为外国朋友
简单介绍你的家乡，以下是你介绍的主要内容。
1. 地理位置：中国广东，毗邻香港；
2. 有300多年的悠久历史, 人口达200万；
3．经济高度发达，人民生活安康；
4. 教育现代化，90%的高中毕业生进入大学学习；
5. 风景秀丽，每年接待大量来自海内外的游客。
【写作要求】 1．只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
               2．开头和结尾已给出，不计算在5个句子中。
3. 答案请写在答题卷的相应位置上。
ladies and gentlemen,
    i would like to introduce my hometown to you.
_____________________________________________________________________ 　　     thank you and welcome to my hometown!
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
one possible version：
ladies and gentlemen,
    i would like to introduce my hometown to you.
my hometown, neighboring hong kong, is located in guangdong province of china. it has a history of more than 300 years and a population of two million. with its highly-developed economy, the people in my hometown are leading a happy life. it offers children modern education and 90% of the high school leavers are admitted to universities. every year the picturesque scenery attracts lots of visitors from home and abroad.
thank you and welcome to my hometown!
附：基础写作（15分）评分信息点：
1. 地理位置：中国广东（1分），毗邻香港（1分）
2. 有300多年的悠久历史（1分）,人口达200万（1分）
3. 经济高度发达（1分），人民生活安康（1分）
4. 教育现代化（1分），90%的高中毕业生进入大学学习（2分）
5. 风景秀丽（1分），每年接待大量来自海内外的游客（2分）
6. 表达内容的连贯性。（3分）
①0分：内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散。
②1-2分：内容连贯性较好，代词、连词等的使用有个别错误。
③3分：内容连贯，结构紧凑，上下句衔接自然，正确使用代词、连词等。
38. 基础写作
 (环境保护周,支持北京举办XX年奥运会)     
你校即将开展“环境保护周”活动, 请你为校英语角墙报写一篇相关报道。
[写作内容]
活动目的：支持北京举办XX年奥运会, 保护我们生存的环境。
活动时间：6月3日到6月8日。
主办单位：校学生会和团委。
活动内容：打扫操场, 给树木花草浇水, 收集旧报纸, 旧书, 空罐头盒, 废玩具, 分类后
送交回收中心。
活动意义：提高同学们的环保意识。
【写作要求】 
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯

one possible version：
  in order to support beijing to held the XX olympic games and protect our environment, an activity was organized by the youth league and student’s union of our school during the week from june 3rd to june 8th. all the students in the senior grades took active part in it. some students cleaned the playground, watered the young trees and flowers, and removed weeds; some students collected waste paper, old books, empty cans and old toys. they had them sorted and sent them to the recycling centre. the activity is really instructive, now we all have realized how important protecting the environment is.
 39. 基础写作(一份关于领取和使用学生卡的英文说明)     
【写作内容】 
    假设有一批英国中学生将到你所在的国际学校学习。你校学生使用的电子卡必须在开学的第一天到学生中心领取。以下是此卡的一些信息：
 
       请根据上述信息，写一份关于领取和使用学生卡的英文说明，你的介绍必须包括以下的内容：
    1．如何领取该卡；    2．该卡的功能；    3．该卡的使用方法；
    4．使用该卡的注意事项；    5．遗失该卡后的补救措施。
[写作要求]
    1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
    2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】 
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version：
on the first day of the school, go to the students’ centre to get your student id card. it is an electronic card which is used for opening the doors to your classroom, reading room and dormitory. to use it, insert the card and when the light turns green you can enter the rooms. you should be careful to keep the card safe. if you lose your card, call the students' centre on 999 immediately for help.  (77字)
40. 基础写作(关爱生命  携手‘艾滋’儿童”的活动)     
【写作内容】 
假设你参加了你校组织的 “关爱生命  携手‘艾滋’儿童”的活动。
请你根据以下信息，写一篇英文日记，叙述活动情况。
 

活
动
安
排 
内容 1．时  间：XX年12月1日 星期六8：30 启程，
           共进午餐后返回
  2．地  点：校门口集中，一个半小时自行车车程
目的地：红十字会医院
  3．活  动：亲切交谈、牵手跳舞、赠送礼物、拍照留念
 感受 ……
【写作要求】
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
注 意：日记的开头已写好。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version：
december1st, saturday, XX                                      fine
today is the world aids day, so our school organized an activity called “take care of our lives, hand in hand with aids children”. at 8:30 am, we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half. soon after we got to the red cross hospital, where most aids children are staying, we began to have close chats with them to see how their life is going, and then we danced happily together. having got to know them so well, we presented our gifts, took lots of photos and ate lunch together before we came back. i feel very great to see the aids children so happy when they are not ignored and taken good care of.
41. 基础写作(一则班级新闻“报道”)     
【写作内容】 
假如你是李华，你是今天的值日生。请你根据下列中文提示，在英语课前用英语作“班级新闻”报道。

班 级 新 闻
篮球比赛 1．昨天下午，我班胜了高三（7）；
2．李虎受伤，在场同学，深受感动。
好人好事 “给山区儿童献爱心捐献活动”：
1．捐衣200件；捐款约4，000元，全校最多；
2．何立500元。
简要评价 ……
【写作要求】 
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
 注意：报告的开头和结尾已写好。
 hello, everyone .here are two breath-taking events of our class that happened this week.
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
 that’s all ,thank you !
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version：
hello everyone, here are two breath-taking events of our class that happened this week.
yesterday afternoon, we beat class 7 in basketball, and during the match, li hu hurt himself accidentally, but refused to stop playing till the end, which encouraged and moved us all on the spot. here is another report about the donation activity for the mountain areas. we have donated 200 pieces of clothes in all and about 4,000 yuan. accounted for our donations being the most in our school, our class has been thought highly of, especially he li who made a generous donation of 500 yuan, which was all his pocket money.
from these activities, we can see that our class is a co-operative one and full of love and strength, so let’s keep the good merits!                            
that’s all, thank you!    ( 120 words )
42. 基础写作(电影《卧虎藏龙》)     
【写作内容】 
今天，电影院放映电影《卧虎藏龙》（英译：crouching tiger，hidden dragon），
你没能去看，觉得很遗憾，请写一篇日记，应包括以下内容：
1. 没看电影很遗憾。
2. 原因之一是要准备下周的考试。
3. 另外，最近学习很忙，有时只吃面包、喝开水。
4. 结果累坏了身体，病倒了。
5. 电影放映时，只得躺在床上看书。
日记的格式已经给出：
june 16, XX, saturday                               rainy
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【写作要求】 
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3.  注意日记的格式。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version：
june 16, XX,  saturday                                       rainy
it's really a pity that i didn't go to see the film "crouching tiger, hidden dragon" when it was on show today.  one of the reasons was that i was very busy with my study preparing for the exams next week.  besides, i was so busy last week that sometimes i just ate a piece of bread plus a ham and drank some water as a meal.  as a result, i got very tired and fell ill.  so when the film was on show today, though i longed to see it, i had to remain/stay in bed reading my textbooks.
43. 基础写作(摇滚乐队u2 )     
【写作内容】 
请根据下面的信息提示，使用5个规范的英语句子描述所给的全部信息内容。
[信息提示] 
毫无疑问，u2是20世纪80年代英国最受欢迎的摇滚乐队之一。
在30年后的今天，该乐队仍然活跃在乐坛并得到歌迷的喜爱。
乐队组建时间和地点：1976年，爱尔兰；
第一部专辑：boy，取得了巨大的成功；
奖项：第48届格莱美5项大奖，包括年度最佳专辑奖和年度最佳歌曲奖。
[写作要求]
1. 标题：u2
2. 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容
3. 将5个句子组织成连贯的短文
4. 参考词汇：
第48届格莱美奖  the 48th annual grammy awards
        年度最佳专辑奖   album of the year 
年度最佳歌曲奖   song of the year
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
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one possible version：
u2
u2 was founded in ireland in 1976.  there is no doubt that u2 was one of the most popular rock & roll bands of the 1980s.  in 1980, they recorded their first album “boy”, which was a great success to them.  after thirty years, u2 is still very active and deeply loved by its fans.  at the 48th annual grammy awards, u2 won five grammies, including album of the year and song of the year.
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love is like a butterfly. it goes where it pleases and it pleases where it goes.
爱情就像一只蝴蝶，它喜欢飞到哪里，就把欢乐带到哪里。
44. 基础写作(日记一则 唱英文歌 i believe i can fly)     
【写作内容】 
下午数学考试,你成绩不佳，心情郁闷。晚上几个好朋友邀你去歌唱厅（ktv）唱歌，你们一晚上唱得很尽兴。你用日记的形式记录下你今天的活动及感受。
1、下午的数学考试你的成绩不佳，心情一直不好。
2、晚上同学邀请你去ktv唱歌，这是你第一次去ktv。
3、大家唱得很高兴，而你一直当听众，你觉得你的歌唱得不好，不敢去唱。
4、在大家的鼓励下，你终于拿起了麦克风（microphone），唱了一首英文歌 i believe i can fly。
［写作要求］：
1、必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容。
2、 日记的开头和结尾已写好。
friday, nov. 2, XX                    sunny
 this evening i went to the ktv with some of my friends.
 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  
i have become cheerful now and above all i’ve regained self-confidence. i believe that the worst enemy in one’s life is oneself. i shouldn’t lose heart just because of one or two failures because i still have chances to try.
［评分标准］ 句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
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one possible version：
friday, nov. 2, XX                        sunny
 this evening i went to the ktv with some of my good friends.
 this was the first time that i had been to a ktv and at first i didn’t want to go. i was in a bad mood the whole afternoon because i didn’t do well in math exam. at the ktv, everybody sang his favorite songs very happily except me – i was the only one of the audience. i didn’t dare to have a try because i was afraid that i couldn’t sing well. encouraged by my classmates, i picked up the microphone and sang an english song entitled i believe i can fly.
 i have become cheerful now and above all i’ve regained self-confidence. i believe that the worst enemy in one’s life is oneself. i shouldn’t lose heart just because of one or two failures because i still have chances to try.
45. 基础写作(一篇日记 能与外国人交谈感到很高兴)     
【写作内容】 
请根据下面内容要点，写一篇日记。
10月11日星期天，天气晴朗，上午十点，你在一家商店买东西，这时来了一位美国妇女。她要给丈夫买一件衬衫。由于售货员不懂英语，他们都很着急。你了解了情况，帮助了他们。对此，美国妇女对你非常感谢。你对自己能与外国人交谈感到很高兴。
注意： 日记的格式已经给出。
october 11th, sunday                                              fine
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------【写作要求】 
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；将5个句子组织成连贯的短文；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3.  注意日记的格式。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version：
october 11th, sunday,                                                fine
    i happened to be doing some shopping at ten o’clock in a shop this morning when an american lady entered the shop. she told the shop assistant that she wanted to buy a shirt for her husband, but he didn’t understand what she was saying, so at that time they all seemed to be very anxious. seeing this, i went over and helped them out. the american lady was very grateful to me for my help. i am very glad that i could talk with foreign guests in english.
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if i had a single flower for every time i think about you, i could walk forever in my garden.
假如每次想起你我都会得到一朵鲜花，那么我将永远在花丛中徜徉。
where there is great love, there are always miracles.
  哪里有真爱存在，哪里就有奇迹。
46. 基础写作(高中课改的情况)     
【写作内容】 
假设你是某校高一学生李明，美国朋友tom致信你校学生会，想了解你校高中课改的情况。以下是你学习的课程及其科目简表：

领
域 语言与
文学 数
学 人文与社会 科  学 技 术 艺术 体育及健康 综合实践 活动
科
目 
语文 
英语 
数学 
政
治 
历
史 
物理 
化学 
生物 
地理 信息技术 通信技术 
音乐 
美术  
参考词汇： 课程curriculum;   综合实践integrated practice

请你根据上述表格内容，给tom发一封电子邮件。提及的内容包括以下方面：
1． 新课程学习的八大领域；
2． 新增加了“技术”和“综合实践活动”两个学习领域；
3． 你非常喜欢新增学习领域的课程；
【写作要求】
1． 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容；
2． 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学习。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version：
hi, tom!
i’m a senior one student now.  from your e-mail, i’m very glad to learn that you are interested in our new curriculum of our school.  well, we are going in for our national reforms on curriculum, which is pided into eight fields: language and literature, maths, science, human and society, arts, technology, integrated practice activities, and health and physical education. among them, arts and integrated practice activities are both new learning fields.but we all interested in our new curriculum and work hard at them.
   looking forward to hear from you again.
yours truly,
li ming
47. 基础写作(简介同学李琳)     
【写作内容】
   请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
[情景说明]
用英语简单描述你的同学李琳。 你的描述必须包括：
1. 年龄16岁，身材不高，衣着朴实；
2. 学习情况：学习很用功，独立完成作业，各科成绩优良；
3. 品质：待人和蔼，乐于助人，耐心帮助同学学习英语；
4. 业余爱好：喜欢音乐，爱好体育。
【写作要求】 
1. 短文必须使用5个句子介绍包括以上要点的全部内容，可以适当增减
细节，使内容连贯；将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 短文的标题为：我的好同学。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version：
my good classmate
    my good classmate, li lin, who is 16 years old, isn’t tall and is always dressed simply. / li lin, a good classmate of mine, aged 16, isn’t tall and is always dressed simply. she works so hard and always tries her best to finish her homework by herself /alone that she does well in all the subjects. she is kind to any other person and (she is) ready /willing to help others. she is good at english and she always helps the classmates who are poor in english with english. besides /in addition, she has many hobbies, such as listening to music and having sports in her spare time.
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michael jordan 迈克.乔丹
michael jordan used to be an nba member in the u. s. a.  he is a legend sports man.  his great skill is so amazing that people call him a flying man.  although he is not very tall in the basketball field, his wonderful skill always helps him to win games.  he isn't a professional basketball player of nba now, but he is still a good example in nba.  a few weeks ago, he came to visit china.  so many of his fans followed his track in beijing in order to have a look at this great sports star.
48. 基础写作(一次以 “protect our earth”为主题的英语演讲比赛)     
【写作内容】 
请使用5个规范的英语句子描述你参加的一次以 “ protect our earth ”为
主题的英语演讲比赛, 短文要包括以下所给的全部信息内容。
时间 8月26日 (上星期六)
地点 广州市青少年宫
过程 查资料; 写演讲稿; 一上台很紧张, 但很快平静下来;
结果 获第三名
感受 一方面自信心很重要; 另一方面只有在不断使用英语的过程中, 语言水平才能得到提高。
【写作要求】  1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version：
last saturday i took part in a speech contest at guangzhou children’s palace, whose theme was “to protect our earth”. after i looked for information in the library and on the net many times, i prepared a draft for the speech. but when my turn was coming, i felt extremely nervous. i tried to calm myself down as soon as possible, and to my joy, i got the third place at last. by participating in this contest, i came to the understanding that self-confidence can encourage us to do everything well and that only by using the language constantly can we improve our english.
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my winter vacation   寒假记事
     during the winter vacation, nothing is different for my life. i wake up 11 o’clock am everyday, after a washing, i have a good lunch with my parents. next i play computer games till the time to have supper. after have dinner. i go on playing till 2 o’clock am, and then go to sleep with tiredness. this is one dull day of my winter vacation.
      but i haven’t bored all the time. sometimes i read the books, sometime i listen to the music or the radio in the bed，because it was very cold outside and snowy all the day. and i also meat some of my good friends during the vacation ,we have a very long talk about the life of each other in the past year and play table tennis together .and i watched the spring festival party of the cctv in the last seconds of the XX year! i think this is the thing most people of china doing at that time.
49. 基础写作(霍英东)     
【写作内容】 
请根据以下信息写一篇介绍霍英东的文章。
出  生 1923年5月，香港。
个人经历 1、7岁丧父，家境贫困;
2、1955年后，经营建筑、航运、石油等，成为国内外知名人士;
3、改革开放以来，先后捐资支持教育、文化、体育、和福利事业款项达100多亿港元。
影    响 成为“感动中国”的人物。
【写作要求】
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
  参考词汇： 改革开放  the reform and open policy
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version：
in may, 1923, dr huo yingdong was born from a poor family in hong kong. at the age of ten, his father died. after 1955,he was engaged in architecture, shipping, petroleum and became a famous person at home and abroad.
since the beginning of the reform and open policy, he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education, culture, sports, public welfare in mainland .
he has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country, which makes him a moving china hero.
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stephen hawking   斯蒂芬.霍金
     stephen hawking is one of the famous scientists in this century.  he is now wheelchair bound and unable to feed himself or get in and out of bed alone.  but he has refused to give in to the condition.  now he is regarded as one of the world's leading authorities on cosmology.  last year he was invited to china, impressing us  with  his  self-confident,  humorous  and  witty conversations.

50. 基础写作(不要抽烟,别学抽烟)     
【写作内容】 
以no smoking 为题, 写一篇短文, 内容包括以下要点:
1. 列举抽烟现状(中国抽烟者45%, 多为年轻人, 甚至中学生)
2. 分析原因(乐趣, 提神refresh oneself)
3. 叙述抽烟害处(坏习惯, 有害健康, 浪费金钱, 引起火灾)
4. 劝告人不要抽烟,别学抽烟
【写作要求】 
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯
one possible version：
                   smoking is harmful
it’s said that in china smokers cover about 45 percent of the population, most of who/whom are young people and even middle school students. when asked why they enjoy smoking, some say smoking is a pleasure while others believe that it can refresh themselves. in fact, smoking is a bad habit because smoking not only does great harm to our health but wastes a lot of money and may even cause fires.
today, more and more people are beginning to realize the harm of smoking and decide to give it up. if you are not a smoker, don’t start.
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the advantages and disadvantages with internet   上网的利弊
the following aspects could best illustrate the advantages with the internet. net surfers (网上冲浪者) in different countries can share interesting knowledge and the latest information. besides, internet has provided a major opportunity to buy and sell merchandise (商品). what is more, people may get medical help or even vote on internet. its advantages seem countless.
    behind all this glowing talk, however, are some problems. internet makes people passive by stopping them making their own entertainment. so much so that when there is a breakdown or jam, people may find that world wide web turns into world wide wait. what is worse, some children have access to the scenes of violence and sex. apart from these, it can be affected by viruses(病毒) and hackers (黑客).
    we should handle its problems; meanwhile we should exploit its potential as well. with proper management of internet people ought to experience more fruits of the information revolution. all the wisdom of the ages, all the information that has enlightened mankind for centuries, should be available to us with the healthy development of internet.
51. 基础写作（迎奥运, 我们能做些什么）
   XX 年奥运会将在中国举行, 请根据以下资料说明，使用5个规范句子描述全部所给信息内容。
【写作内容】
(1)  XX 年奥运会是21世纪重大体育比赛之一,包括中国在内的每个国家都在为此做准备.
(2)  奥运会的作用.
(3)  中国为举办奥运, 将要做些什么?
(4)  你个人该做些什么?
【写作要求】 
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】 句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
one possible version：
what can we do for the olympic games of XX?
   the XX olympic games , which is one of the most important events in the history of sports, will be held in beijing. every country in the world, including china, is preparing for it. it will do good to the relationship between china and any other country in the world. the government should try to improve our environment and build enough stadiums as well as broaden the roads in beijing. as a student, i must try to learn english well and try to do something for the olympics games.
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XX olympic games XX奥运会
the announcement, read out by the 81-year-old samaranch, was answered with wild jubilation from the chinese delegation in moscow, and with fireworks in beijing. ioc senior member kim un-yong said after the voting that beijing deserved the olympic games.
    "beijing is capable of staging a great olympic games," said the 71-year-old south korean. "the result wasn't a surprise to me."
    with the motto "new beijing, great olympics", beijing promises to host a "green olympics", a "hi-tech olympics" and the "people's olympics".
    the 3,000-year-old city is becoming a truly international city and showing a new, vigorous image through its ongoing economic reforms.
     beijing enjoys the widest popular support among the five bidding cities. a gallup opinion poll commissioned by the government showed 94.9 percent of the public in favor of it. the ioc's own surveys found support even higher. the chinese government has pledged to spend 20 billion u.s. dollars building sports complexes and refurbishing the beijing infrastructure. there are plans for a new exhibition center with twin skyscrapers that could be taller than any in the world.
陶奇的问题
52. 基础写作(陶奇的问题)
【写作内容】假如下图中的小学生叫陶奇（tao qi）。请根据图片所提供的情景和下面的中文提示，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容，写一篇英语短文，必须包括如下要点：
 
 1. 陶奇为什么不敢回家，而请求警察叔叔送他回家？
 2. 假设这位警察答应了陶奇的请求，把他送回家并见到了家长，这位警察
该怎样劝说他们？
 3. 家长非常感激警察的忠告。陶奇得到了家长的鼓励，努力学习，进步很快。
【写作要求】 
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】  句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
one possible version：
tao qi is a primary school pupil/student, who failed in the exam and didn’t dare (to) return home. then he remembered the social saying, “if you have any difficulty/trouble, please ask/turn to the police for help.” he went to ask the policeman to send him back home and the policeman found out the reason and promised him to do so. when they got home, the policeman met tao qi’s parents and advised them not to punish tao qi for his failure in the exam. the parents thanked the policeman for his good advice and from then on, tao qi was encouraged, and worked hard at his lessons, making rapid / great progress later.
53. 一批澳大利亚学生到广东香城游学 
【写作内容】假设有一批澳大利亚学生到广东香城游学，你是项目的负责人，在出发前你简要向学生们介绍这次安排。请写一个简要的发言稿，主要内容如下：
时间 主要安排
第1天，1月30日 早上到达广东省广州，随后坐船去岛屿城市——香城，在简短的接待会上与住宿家庭见面，去住宿家庭。
第2至15天，2月1日至14日 上午在香城语言学院学习，下午在岛内旅游，去自然公园，逛森林，看大树。
第16、17天，2月15、16日 回广州，爬白云山，野餐。
第18天，2月18日 从广州国际机场返回悉尼，大约下午9点到达（澳大利亚时间），家长在机场接。
[写作要求]
只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容，开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总句数。
[评分标准] 句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
attention please, everyone:
now i would like to tell you the arrangement for the journey.
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that’s all. thank you.
attention please, everyone:
now i would like to tell you the arrangement for the journey.
we will arrive in guangzhou guangdong province on the morning of jauary 30th (day 1), and later that morning go to xiangcheng by ship, the capital of an island city. on arriving xiangcheng, we will meet the host families at the short reception and then leave with them. from february 1st to 14th (day 2 to day 15) , we will study in xiangcheng language college in the morning, and in the afternoon we will travel around the island, such as going to the natural park to have a walk in forest and viewing the beautiful tall trees. on the 15th and 16th (day 16 and day 17) we will be back to guangzhou, where we will climb baiyun mountain, and have a picnic there. on the 17th (day 18) we will fly back to syndey form guangzhou international airport and arrive about 9 pm australia time and greeted by parents at the airport.
 that’s all. thank you.