my unlucky day

It was　Monday ,and I had　to go to school .The weather was so fine .The school is far away from home ,so I had to go there by bus .It was rush hour to go to work and school .So the bus was so crowded .I disliked the feeling .Then my school life was beginning ! 　
　　there are 7 classes a day ,including mathematics ,Chinese ,English ,art and so on .I am keen on art .and I dream of becoming an artist when I grow up .but I hate math very much !it is so difficult for me !by the way ,I am a hardworking student--a great many people said that to me--so I am really careful in class ! there is a restaurant in my school .so I ate lunch in the school .the food was reallly delicious !after studying the whole day ,I went home .in the evening ,I did my homework and went over the lessons I had learned during　the day .finally ,I went to bed and slept soundly. 　
　　Oh !what a terrible day !this is my day !