Let us face the problems

Rich or poor, young or old, we all have the problems. Maybe it is about your future, job or grades .

In a word, the trouble is everywhere.

As a middle school student, I have the experience deeply. All day, we get all kinds of stress. In the school, we have to compare with our classmeats. At home, the parents push our so hard, they just want our to do the best and they hardever think our feeling! That if you have the problems like these, so what should you do ? There are some advice ,I hope its can help you.                                                    

First ,when your parents push you so hard, communition with they, in my opinion, communition is the best way to solve the problems ,you could sit down and talk with your parents to find an acceptable way you and your parents.

Second, you can write the diary, it can keep the nervous ourselves

Finally, when you are angry with something, maybe you can try to listen to the music, a good music can make you relax and its also can let you bad mood die down  

In the end, I want to say:‘stop the complain, challenge yourself, do not worry about the troubles, let us face the bravely. And you can see: the life is more beautifully!！”

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  Rich or poor, young or old, we all have the problems. Maybe it is about your future, job or grades .

  In a word, the trouble is everywhere.

 As a middle school student, I have deep experience in it. We are under great pressure. In the school, we have to compare with our classmates. At home, the parents push us so hard, they just want us to do the best and they hardly ever think of our feeling! If you have the problems like these, what should you do ? There is some advice, I hope it can help you.                                                    

  First ,when your parents push you so hard, communicate with them. In my opinion, communition is the best way to solve the problems ,you could sit down and talk with your parents to find an acceptable way.

 Second, you can write a diary, it can keep the nervousness yourself.

 Third, when you are angry, maybe you can try to listen to the music. Good music can make you relaxed and it also can let you bad mood die down.  

In the end, I want to say,‘stop complaining, challenge yourself, and do not worry about the troubles. Let us face them bravely, and you can see the life will be more beautiful.”

    初三:张宁