动物园搬迁问题为题目的作文

  假设你是李华,最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信,反映讨论结果。

  赞成迁出:反对迁出:

  1.游客多,交通堵塞郊区环境好1.建于1906年,中外闻名搬迁易造成动物死亡

  注意:1.词数100字左右,信的开头已为你写好。可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇: 郊区—suburb

Dear Editor ,

  Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.

  Yours truly,

  Li Hua

  [名师点评]

  这篇文章写得还是比较精彩的。要点表达得完整而准确,清楚展示了主题。先提出了文章的主题,进而列出了赞成的观点及其相关的理由,同时在其后又给出了反面的观点,论据十分充足。文章结构严谨,前后连贯。

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