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　　母亲去世时，我念初二。为了弥补我确实的母爱，父亲对我有些溺爱。

　　Mom passed away when I was in Junior Two. I did whatever I pleased as Daddy doted on me for mercy.

　　他是单位的中层干部，却推掉了所有的应酬，尽力在家里陪我。

　　He was a middle-level cadre but turned down all social whirls to stay together with me at home.

　　一年后，我考上离家很远的重点中学，寄宿在学校，周末才能回家一次。父亲每天给我打电话，只是在嘘寒问暖之余，渐渐有了一丝羞涩和喜悦，我知道，父亲一定有事。

　　One year later, I was luckily admitted into a key senior high school and was lodging at the school dormitory as there was a long way from home. In such a case I could only get back on weekends. Almost each school day Daddy would call me just for some reminders but by and by,I could gradually feel a little touch of bashfulness and joyance in his voice,which dropped a hint to me.

　　那个周末回家，父亲虽然也像往常一样做了一桌鲜美可口的饭菜，但却穿了一套笔挺的西装，系一条领带，刮了胡子。他腼腆地问我：“小萱，我看上去怎么样？”

　　When I came home that weekend,Daddy prepared all superb dishes for me as he usually did. But to my great surprise,he wore a trim suit with a tie and was well shaved. He asked me bashfully,"Xiao Xuan,how does that look?"

　　我重重地叹气：“不妙。显得这么年轻，别人要说你是我哥。”

　　I deliberately heaved a big sigh,"Gosh! You look so young and others may say you are my brother."